spaceman2028 wrote:That my friend is an instant subscription. Looking forward to this series a LOT!
The way the kremlings move across the ocean floor like those zombies in Pirates of the Caribbean is epic, but the screen scrolls in on them a bit too fast for my liking. Maybe you could smoothen the animation a bit?
spaceman2028 wrote:I was talking about how the camera moves into the water for the "Kremlings Underwater" shot, not how they move toward the camera.
Qyzbud wrote:Nice debut episode, Sono and co.
I love the atmosphere of the establishing shots; the island looks lush and inviting, and David Wise's tropical tunes fit perfectly.
On a more critical note, Cranky's model looks really rounded in some spots, and really angular in others, which is a bit strange. He also seems to be gradually sliding to the right during the scene from 0:48 to 1:02, and then downward/toward the camera in his next shot.
As for some aesthetic enhancement ideas, some bubbles, fish, rippling and/or other watery effects might be nice in the seabed scene. I think it'd feel more "right" if the Kremlings' animation cycles were a fair bit slower, too. Lockjaw's Locker illustrates all of this rather well — if you can see through the gloom.
The Coca-Cola product placement is an interesting touch, heh.
Kimi Kong wrote:Haha~! Coca-Cola need to pay you for the product placement~!
Cyclone wrote:It's a bit rough..but I liked it and added a 'like' on the video. If you want me to critique it further let me know.
Looking forward to watching the next episode.
vege wrote:This will go viral!! this chapter has better ambience sounds, new kongs and voices, i like it i feel that the color of sky could be lighter but it is only my opinion. Poor Donkey kong, surely he is very hungry... come on kongs!
PigmaskColonel wrote:Almost perfect! The only "negative" thing I can say is about Dixie's eyes... They're motionless and expressionless, and it's a bit odd. Is there no way to make her eyes move, or was it not done due to time constraints?
EDIT: Was watching on my phone, it's hard to see so I thought her eyes weren't moving even though they are... Disregard this post.
Qyzbud wrote:Here you go, Sono — hopefully this helps:
Phyreburnz wrote:Okay, whatever you had planned for your next episodes... cancel it and change it to Cranky Kong Country!
Seriously though, whoever you got for Cranky's voice is friggin' perfect.
vege wrote:This looks epic with the pírate ship, the sounds, the voices, please i want this chapter on youtube soon.
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